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I want to fall in love.
I want to feel my heart beat with yours
I want to never let go
I want to love you

I have to fall in love.
I have to find the other part of me.
I have to feel what I can`t
I have to love you

I need to fall in love.
I need to have that closeness
I need you to always be with me
I need to love you.

I fell in love
I found what I was searching for
I have what I needed
I love you.
So yeah, I finally did something serious.
Don`t laugh.
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yaoidragon96 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student Writer
quick question: by what you said, did you need to love him or did you need his love ?

long explanation of my confusion : because you said once you loved him you had what you needed but you didnt say anything about him , just about you so it sounds like you wanted to be loved more than you want to love a person

i dont mean to be hating, i hope im not, this was just something i thought
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YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I meant that I needed to love him,
You`re not hating, I get your confusion, I should have been more clear, sorry.
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:iconyaoidragon96:
yaoidragon96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
no no its fine, poetry doesn always equate precision. thank you for clarifying!
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :D
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TheElite782 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love is in the air. Haters better stop breathing.
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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tagged-in-scars Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*sobs hysterically*


Awwww!!<3333333
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay...
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tagged-in-scars Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sadie posted awww <333333333333333333

as a joke
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Bl33ding-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
this is very romantic, love the poetry
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