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You say I`m cold.
You say I don`t want to be friends.
You say I keep to the shadows.
You say I don`t like people.
You say I`m weird.

I`m not cold, I`m shards of a person.
I`d love to be friends, but I`m scared.
I keep to the shadows to stay out of sight.
I like people but I can`t trust them.
I`m different.

Would you be warm if you`d been broken?
Would you be friendly if stabbed in the back?
Would you walk in light if darkness surrounded you?
Would you like people who made you want to die?
Would you be different?

Before you judge, make an effort to see.
Surfaces have depths, people have sadness beneath.
My latest poem. Feedback would be majorly appreciated. :D
EDIT: Fuck me. This has got way more views than I was expecting O.o
Big glomps to all who faved/commented :)
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:iconinnocenceofourhearts:
InnocenceOfOurHearts Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  New member
it's simply amazing what you created here..it's so so deep. i'm stunned..and can't find the right words...i wanna hug youHeart Heart Heart 
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N4NSHE Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
you has touched a sore spot.
=)
i like this text.
it's true for me.
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:iconunisis-2-in-1-beauty:
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student General Artist
you described perfectly this being that i refer to as me.
merci for this :)
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your lovely comment and I`m glad you liked it. :D
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
you are most welcome! ^-^
(you deserved it)
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Lightningwing1234 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student Artist
wow....
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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Lightningwing1234 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Artist
Welcome!
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:iconyinandyang2011:
YinandYang2011 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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Lightningwing1234 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Artist
=3
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